This version of my short film was based around an entirely different idea that didn't particularly follow any sort of plot or characters. It was going to be shot in a more abstract, surreal and artistic manner. I decided to abandon this idea as i felt it lacked substance and couldn't be easily descrived. It had a niche target audience, and when pitched to an audience I found that my pitch didn't entice the audience as much as I would have hoped. So i started to completley dismantle my idea and start afresh until I eventually thought of an idea which deveolped into my final short film idea and later, Pitch.